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Find below the book summary of Breakthrough Advertising by Eugene Schwartz.

This book was a good book on copywriting.


Unfortunately, the book is no longer sold.


One Idea

You must write your ads according to:

  • The state of sophistication of your market.
  • The desire your product fulfills.
  • The level of awareness of your audience.

Executive Summary

All ads start with research

  • Of the market: breadth, depth, sophistication, emotional forces, desire.
  • Of your product: desire, how much people know it, etc.

The second step is to write the headline. It must catch people interested in your product and compel them to read the second sentence of your ad. State the biggest desire your product fulfills in your headline.

The third step is to write the copy. The copy should intensify the desires and satisfaction your prospect thinks he’ll have once he buys your product.

There are seven techniques to do so.

  1. Intensification
  2. Identification: tell the customer he will be the person he desires to be in his head (well-read, rebel, etc)
  3. Gradualization: start with a belief your prospect accepts and extend it.
  4. Redefinition: remove road blocks before they arise.
  5. Mechanization: explain how the product works.
  6. Concentration: disqualify the competition.
  7. Camouflage: write your ad as if it was an informational article.
A sales letter.

Summary of Breakthrough Advertising Written by Eugene Schwartz

Part I: Markets and Headlines

First step: study the market

Copy starts with an analysis of your market and product. You need to identify:

  • The breadth and depth of the market
  • The emotional forces that create the market
  • The main desire that drives the market

Your job will be to harness these forces towards the solution to the problem that exists which is your product.

Second step: study the product

Which problem does your product fixe and which desires lie behind the purchase of the product? You need to study:

  • The physical product (for a car, that would be the iron, the plastic, the seats…)
  • The functional product: what the product is used for. Eg: cars are used to drive from A to B, but not always. Think Ferrari, Lamborghini.

-> these make the theme of your ad:

  • the desire your market demands and its satisfaction
  • the need your market feels and its solution
  • the identification your market gropes for and its expression.

Now, you’ll have to express this theme.

To do so, you need to explore the state of maturity of your market. Find out:

  • How much people know about your product and what it does
  • How much they know about similar products
  • How much they care about both

-> point of entry for your headline. It’s the point of greatest interest and acceptance on the part of your prospect.

It may be located anywhere in:

  • Your product itself (Xbox, PS5)
  • In its price
  • In its performance (iPhone)
  • In the satisfaction your product promises (massage)
  • In the need your market demands from your product (masks during a pandemic)
  • Or in the market itself (food)

Your headline is determined by two requirements: interest and believability.

Your headline must touch the interest of the person reading it, and must be believable.

This is why you can’t always use the most powerful claim from your product in your headline or even the very problem that your product solves – if it’s not believable, it won’t work.

How to Write an Ad

First stage: research

Choose the most powerful desire that applies to your product. Every mass desire has three vital dimensions.

Every product appeals to two, three or four mass desires. But you can only use one in your headline.

Only one is the key that unlocks the maximum economic power at the particular time your advertisement is published. 

Your choice among these mass desires is the most important step of the entire copywriting process.

Second stage: headline

Acknowledge that desire, reinforce it, and/or offer the means to satisfy it in a single statement in the headline of your ad.

Your headline is the first step in recognizing this mass desire, justifying it, intensifying it, and directing the quench of this desire (the solution) along one specific path.

Your headline can never mention your product.

Third stage: body copy

Now all is left for you to do is to take your product’s performance (what it does) and show it satisfies that desire.

The analysis of your product

The study of your product should therefore start with a number of different performances it contains. Then, match these performances to the mass desires, then feature the one performance that will harness the greatest sales power.

A car, for example, offers the following performances: transportation, dependability, economy, power, recognition, value, novelty…and yet your ad can feature only one of these performances; you can only use one mass desire at a time.

Every product gives you dozens of keys. But only one will fit the lock.

Your job is to find that one dominant performance and squeeze every drop of power out of it in your presentation, and then convince your reader that that performance and that satisfaction can come only from your product.

This definition of your market and the performance form the core concept of your ad.

You will therefore have to start with your market, and end up with your product. The bridge between these two is your ad. Your ad always begins with your market, and leads that market inevitably into your product.


The headline is based on the answer to the following three questions:

  • What is the mass desire that creates this market?

The answer to question 1 gives you the nationwide force that creates your market.

  • How much do these people know today about the way my product satisfies their desire? What is their State of Awareness?
  • How many other products have been presented to them before yours? (Their State of Sophistication.)

The answer to questions 2 and 3 gives you the location of that market in relation to your product.

Your headline’s only job is to stop your prospect and get him to read the second sentence of your ad. Your second sentence must get the reader to read the third sentence. Etc. It is your job to force the prospect to read the full story, not just a skimmed version of it.

In its natural development, every market’s awareness passes through several stages. The more aware your market, the easier the selling job, the less you need to say.

The longer the product exists, the more sophisticated the market is, the harder it will be to sell.

An aware customer:

  • knows of your product
  • knows what it does
  • knows he wants it.

→ your headline—in fact, your entire ad—needs to state a little more except the name of your product and a bargain price (if applicable).

The remainder of the advertisement can summarize quickly the most desirable selling points. Then add the name of a store, or a coupon, and close.

A less aware customer:

  • knows of the product but doesn’t yet know he wants it
  • isn’t completely aware of all your product does
  • or isn’t convinced of how well it does it
  • or hasn’t yet been told how much better it does it now.

Your headline is faced with 1 of 7 tasks:

First task: To reinforce your prospects desire for your product:

You can use association to do so:

  • “Steinway—The Instrument of the Immortals.”
  • “Jov—The Costliest Perfume in the World.”
  • “Tastes like you just picked it—Dole.”
  • “The skin YOU love to touch—Woodbury”

Second task: To sharpen your prospect’s image of the way your product satisfies that desire.

Third task: To extend his image of where and when your product satisfies that desire;

  • “Anywhere you go. Hertz is always nearby”

Fourth task: To introduce new proof, details, documentation of how well your product satisfies that desire;

  • “9 out of 10 screen stars use Lux Toilet Soap for their priceless smooth skins.”

Fifth task: To announce a new mechanism in that product to enable it to satisfy that desire even better.

Sixth task: to announce a new mechanism in your product that eliminates former limitations

Seventh task: To completely change the image or the mechanism of that product, in order to remove it from the competition of other products claiming to satisfy the same desire.

“This is not water. This is Contrex”.

In all seven cases, the approach is the same. You display the name of the product—either in the headline or in an equally large logo, and use the remainder of the headline to point out its superiority. The body of the ad is then an elaboration of that superiority, including visualization, documentation, mechanization.

Warm customer

Sometimes, the prospect either knows or recognizes immediately that he wants what the product does, but he doesn’t yet know that there is a product that will do it for him. In this case, the problem is two-fold: one needs to define the problem, and one needs to define the solution. There are three steps to do so:

  • Name the desire and/or its solution in your headline.
  • Prove that that solution can be accomplished.
  • Show that the mechanism of that accomplishment is contained in your product.

Cold customer

How to Introduce Products That Solve Needs: The prospect has not a desire, but a need, but he doesn’t yet realize the connection between the fulfillment of that need and your product.

This is the problem-solving ad.

Start by naming the need and/or its solution in your headline; dramatize the need so vividly that the prospect realizes just how badly he needs the solution.

And then present your product as the inevitable solution.

Headlines and Stages of Awareness

  • A headline for one stage of awareness will not with another stage of awareness.
  • Cold approach: solving a problem people are not aware they have: Planning a headline for a completely unaware or resistant market is first of all a process of elimination. Here’s what NOT to include in your headline:
    • Price: it means nothing to a person who does not know nor want your product.
    • The name of your product: it means nothing to a person who has never seen it before, and may actually damage your ad if you have had a bad model the year before, or if it is now associated with the antiquated, the unfashionable, or the unpleasant. Don’t break the mood or disguise your ad with a prominent logo.
    • A direct statement of what your product does, what desire it satisfies, or what problem it solves. Your product either has not reached that direct stage, or has passed beyond it. You cannot shift from one desire to another. You are not faced here with a problem of sophistication, but one of complete indifference, or unacceptability. Therefore, the performance of your product, and the desire it satisfies, can only be brought in later.

The last thing left to have for your headline is your market.

Call your market into your headline.

You are selling nothing, promising nothing, satisfying nothing.

Instead, you are echoing an emotion, an attitude, a satisfaction that picks people out from the crowd and binds them together in a single statement.

In this type of headline, you are giving them the information they need and want, about a problem still so vague that you are the first to put it into words. Your headline no longer refers to your product, but it must therefore refer even more strongly to your market.

The first stage of sophistication

If you are the first in your market, you are dealing with customers which have no sophistication – > dream of all copywriters!

If you get them interested, they become enthusiastic quickly.

Be simple. Be direct. Above all, don’t be fancy. State the need or the claim in your headline and nothing more.

Dramatize that claim in your copy. Make it as powerful as possible. And then bring in your product and prove that it works. Nothing more, because nothing more is needed.

The second stage of sophistication

Enlarge the claims made from the first stage.

The third stage of sophistication

Everyone is aware of the product, few can distinguish brands from one another.

The mass desire still exists, but it cannot be tapped by the old, simple methods any longer. What this market needs now is a new device to make all these old claims become fresh and believable to them again.

In other words, A NEW MECHANISM: a new way to make the old promise work.

A different process— a fresh chance— a brand-new possibility of success where only disappointment has resulted before.

Here the emphasis shifts from what the product does to HOW it works.

→ we go from “lose 3 kg in two hours now” to “get fat to float out of your body”.

The fourth stage of sophistication

A new stage of elaboration and enlargement. But this time, the elaboration is concentrated on the mechanism, rather than on the promise.


If a competitor has just introduced a new mechanism to achieve the same claim as the one performed by your product, and that new mechanism announcement is producing sales, then you counter in this way. Simply elaborate or enlarge upon the successful mechanism.

Make it easier, quicker, surer; allow it to solve more of the problem; overcome old limitations; promise extra benefits.

You are beginning a stage of embellishment similar to the Second Stage of Sophistication described above.

The same strategy will be effective here.

The fifth stage of sophistication

The product is dead, the market does not believe in the advertising, competitors are dropping out.

The way to get back the prospect into the ad is not through desire, but identification, where you tap into the fact that the prospect identifies with our product.


If you are the first in your field, state the result of your product: lose weight fast, for example. If you are not the first, you need to reinforce the claim by binding it to other images, a process called verbalization.

There are 38 ways to do that.  

  • Measure the size of the claim: lose weight fast → lose 4kg fast
  • Measure the speed of the claim: lose weight fast → lose weight in 30 days
  • Compare the claim: lose weight fast → lose weight faster than athletes
  • Metaphorize the claim: lose weight fast → obliterate your fat fast
  • Sensitize the claim by making the prospect feel, smell, touch, see or hear it: lose weight fast → feel lighter fast
  • Demonstrate the claim by showing a prime example: lose weight fast → It’s just her diet!
  • Dramatize the claim, or its result: lose weight fast → they all accused me of working out in secret…
  • State the claim as a paradox: lose weight fast → lose weight by eating more!
  • Remove limitations from the claim: lose weight fast → lose weight fast without exercise
  • Associate the claim with values or people with whom the prospect wishes to be identified: Lose weight fast → Usain Bolt’s diet
  • Show how much work, in detail, the claim does: lose weight fast → burn up to 300 grams of fat per day
  • State the claim as a question: lose weight fast → who also wants to lose weight fast?
  • Offer information about how to accomplish the claim: lose weight fast → how to lose weight fast
  • Tie authority into the claim: lose weight fast → US army surgeon shows how to lose weight fast
  • Before-and-after the claim: lose weight fast → 10 kg lighter 30 days later
  • Stress the newness of the claim: lose weight fast → BRAND NEW: diet gets you to lose weight fast
  • Stress the exclusivity of the claim: lose weight fast → IN HERE ONLY: lose weight fast
  • Turn the claim into a challenge for the reader: lose weight fast → Can you sustain rapid weight loss?
  • State the claim as a case-history quotation: lose weight fast → I float in those pants!
  • Condense the claim—interchange your product and the product it replaces: lose weight fast → lose weight out of your meal!
  • Symbolize the claim: replace the direct statement or measurement of the claim with a parallel reality: lose weight fast → eat as much as you want and lose weight!
  • Connect the mechanism to the claim in the headline: lose weight fast → burn fat for energy!
  • Startle the reader by contradicting the way he thinks the mechanism should work: lose weight fast → eat as much as you can!
  • Connect the need and the claim in the headline: lose weight fast → the only way to avoid heart disease is to lose weight!
  • Offer information in the ad itself: lose weight fast → why the keto diet works
  • Turn the claim or the need into a case history: lose weight fast → she ate so much meat!
  • Give a name to the problem or need: lose weight fast → Can’t lose weight? This diet is the last solution
  • Warn the reader about possible pitfalls if he doesn’t use the product: lose weight fast → Don’t even think about working out if you don’t try this first!
  • Emphasize the claim by its phraseology, by breaking it into two sentences, or repeating it, or a part of it: lose weight fast → Finally a diet that works! The keto diet!
  • Show how easy the claim is to accomplish by imposing a universally-overcome limitation: lose weight fast → if you like meat, veggies and dairy, you can build your dream body!
  • State the difference in the headline: lose weight fast → the difference is that it actually works!
  • Surprise your reader into realizing that former limitations have now been overcome: lose weight fast → no need to be hungry to lose weight anymore!
  • Address the people who can’t buy your product: lose weight fast → if you have failed to lose weight on a diet, don’t even think about reading this – you’ll hate yourself for it.
  • Address your prospect directly: lose weight fast → to those that lost all hope of losing weight fast!
  • Dramatize how hard it was to produce the claim: lose weight fast → A diet a century in the making!
  • Accuse the claim of being too good: lose weight fast → this will bankrupt the weight-loss industry!
  • Challenge the prospects present limiting beliefs: lose weight fast → you are one meal away from “thinner”
  • Turn the claim into a question and answer: lose weight fast → Don’t know how to lose weight? We didn’t either, until we found out about this….

Don’t copy headlines. Echo-ads don’t work. The best way to develop your headline is through writing, asking questions, and rewriting.

Regarding preventive headlines: preventive headlines don’t work on problems that concern people personally. However, they do work when the problem concerns their loved ones -> people won’t buy a preventive tooth-decay toothpaste for themselves, but will for their children.

Finding headlines is a process. You don’t get an idea or a headline, you need to build it, piece after piece.

What you are looking for in this product and this market is the one element that makes them unique. The idea you want— the headline you want— the breakthrough you want— are all wrapped up inside that product and that market.

Nowhere else. No outside formula will give them to you. You are facing a product-market-timing relationship that never happened before, that is unique.

And the solution you need is just as unique.

Part II: The Body Copy

Your body copy does the selling by influencing your customer’s view of the world -> your product becomes the solution to his deepest desires.

To create this world, your copy must expand or alter one or more of the three dimensions of his already-existing world. This is the role of the body copy -> should be long enough for that.

The length of your ad will depend on three factors:

  1. How much copy you need to build his desire for that product as much as you can.
  2. How much copy you need to get him to imagine his life with your product.
  3. How much copy you need to counter objections.

The answers to these three questions determine

  • the length of your ad
  • its structure
  • its development
  • its style
  • its pace.

Desires: they drive your prospects through life. Desires can be physical (being strong, thin, getting rid of acne), material (money), sensual (a cold beer, a hot partner).

You can’t create desires, but you can expand them or channel them. This is the art of salesmanship.

Advertising is the literature of desire.

Your job is to show your prospect every possible way that they can fulfill their desires.

A copywriter’s first qualifications are imagination and enthusiasm.

Your job is to show your customer in detail all the tomorrows that your product makes possible for him -> must take unformulated desires and translate them into reality.

The sharper you can draw your pictures, the better it is.

How much space can you give to this process of Intensification?

This depends on two factors:

  • the amount of space allotted to you for the entire ad.
  • the number of ways you can present your images without giving the feeling of repetition or boredom

You are working against two opposing forces:

  • The ads that the customer saw about similar products (market sophistication). If your prospect has read the same phraseology before, he will be bored by it.
  • The phraseology of your own ad. Once you have presented your basic fulfillment in a certain way, you must vary your viewpoint in your second description, or not present it again.

Identifications: These are the people your customer wants to play in life. People buy a diet for health, but they also buy it to project an image of health and attraction. Put these identification traits in your product.

Beliefs: These are the opinions, attitudes, and conceptions of reality that your prospect lives by.

It is not advertising’s mission to argue with them. And no one advertiser can change them.

Accept reality as it is, don’t change it!

The beliefs form a filter through which the information regarding the product pass, get accepted, or rejected. You start with these beliefs as a base. You build up from them by using your prospect’s logic, not your own, to prove that your product satisfies his desires.

We will now look at 7 techniques of breakthrough copy.

Seven Techniques of Breakthrough Copy

The First Technique of Breakthrough Copy: Intensification

Intensification: the presenting of a series of fresh, new and different fulfillments for your prospects dominant desire.

Here are 13 ways to intensify. These are the 13 parts of the body copy.

The thirteen parts of the body copy.

  1. First present the product or the satisfaction it gives directly with a specific description: MORE ROSES THAN YOU EVER SAW ON ANY ROSE BUSH
  2. Put the Claims in Action. Show not only how the product looks, and what benefits it gives the reader, but exactly how it does this (explain how the plane works).
  3. Bring In the Reader. Tell your customer what will happen to him the first day he owns that product.
  4. Show Him How to Test Your Claims. Turn the demonstration into a test. Let your reader visualize himself using the product. Must be specific.
  5. Stretch Out Your Benefits in Time. Show not for just an hour or a day, but over a span of weeks and months.
  6. Bring In an Audience. Tell the audience what happened with the people that actually got the product.
  7. Show Experts Approving.
  8. Compare, Contrast, Prove Superiority. Show the difference between those that have the product, and those that do not.
  9. Picture the Black Side, Too. Make their problem worse, and solve it for them.
  10. Show How Easy It Is to Get These Benefits.
  11. Use Metaphor, Analogy, Imagination. There are infinite opportunities for the use of imagination to present those facts in more dramatic form, outside of the rigidly realistic approach. 
  12. Before you’re done, summarize.
  13. Put Your Guarantee to Work. Call to Action.

The second technique of breakthrough copy: Identification

How to Build a Saleable Personality Into Your Product

Identification is the desire of your prospect to act out certain roles in his life.

You can do so in two ways.

  1. By turning your product into an instrument for achieving these roles.
  2. By turning that product into an acknowledgment that these roles have already been achieved.

Every product you work on should offer your prospect two different reasons for buying it.

  1. The fulfillment of a physical want or need.
  2. A method of fulfilling that need that defines him to the outside world.

This is the role your product offers to your prospect. It is the non-functional, super-functional value of that product. And it is built into that product—not by engineering—but by merchandising alone.

The way people represent themselves (or ways they wish people would believe them to be) are called roles. There are two types of roles.

  • Character roles: progressive, liberal, sophisticated. These already belong to the customer who wishes to reinforce them.

The product can serve the prospect in three distinctive ways.

  • Achieve mastery of his chosen character role.
  • It can help simplify condense or speed up this mastery, such as a Speed-Reading Course.
  • And third, and most important, it can serve as a symbol of that mastery.

They satisfy a need + play a role in representation. (buying a book on philosophy to learn AND impress your friends).

At least half of all purchases made today cannot be understood in terms of function alone (think about the Lamborghini).

These are often subconscious -> it’s your role to unearth them in your copy.

Your prospect is more likely to believe in the character roles you assign to him, than he is in the actual capabilities of the product. Tell him that the product makes him sophisticated etc.

  • The second type of role is achievement role: executive, home-owner, entrepreneur, NYT bestseller.

Display is vital because these are not obvious. This car is not any car. It is the number one car driven by top executives.

Thus products become more than products. They are status symbols. They announce our achievements, define our role in life, document our success (Rolex…).

When you have two identical products with the same price that perform the same thing, the differentiation factor will come from the achievement role the product highlights. It is your job to create this role in your ad.

First, your job is to discover the character roles your prospect wants to identify with and that are embodied by your product. Choose the most compelling one.

You need to seek what achievement role the buyers of the product have, then build these qualities into your product.

Identification longings are a separate and immensely powerful form of desire. A desire not for physical satisfaction, but for expression and recognition.

The primary image of the product

The product you are given already has an image attached to it. That’s the primary image.

For example, a piston is a precision-made machine and full of mechanical beauty. You think you could improve the sales by making it virile and masculine. Here’s how to do so:

You do this in two ways: First, by changing the intensity of your primary image. By emphasizing and dramatizing that primary image, if it is already acceptable, or by toning it down, if it is negative or neutral.

For example, the male virility naturally associated with cigarettes is a definite sales ad, even with women. The sheer physical act of smoking—of “playing with fire”—of “breathing fire”—has been for centuries an assertion of manhood and of daring.

Marlboro took this image of virility and intensified it in three ways:

  1. First, they presented men who were themselves, virile.
  2. Second, they presented these men in situations or occupations that demanded virility.
  3. And third, they took the further “Creative Gamble” of affixing to these men’s hands one of the most primitive symbols of virility known to history: tattoos.

Sometimes the primary image may be negative. Or it may be neutral. Some have tried to discard these images, or replace them, and it didn’t work.

You cannot contradict accepted images or beliefs in advertising. In order to overcome these unfavorable images, incorporate them in a larger, overall image, and lower their emotional intensity.

If you demand that your prospect jumps across a believability chasm, your ad will fail. If, however, you build a bridge of ideas or images across that chasm, starting on his side, take your prospect by the hand and lead him over the chasm, then he will let you lead him almost anywhere.

The Third Technique of Breakthrough Copy: Gradualization: How to Make Your Prospect Believe Your Claims Before You State Them

The copywriter seeks the fusion between desire and belief.

What is belief?

It is your prospect’s mental picture of the world he lives in. But even more important is the vast amount of emotional security he derives from these beliefs.


But, if you can channel the tremendous force of his belief behind your claim, then your ad will be powerful.

Beliefs cannot be changed but must be complied with at every step.

Every one of the statements you make in your ad must fit in with your prospect’s version of “the facts” at that precise moment. It is not the function of your ad to change those facts – but you can extend them.

You do so by building a bridge of belief

Start with beliefs your prospect has then lead him logically and comfortably through a gradual succession of more and more remote facts until the sales of your product. It’s called Gradualization.

Gradualization determines the structure of your ad.

Every claim, every image, every proof in your ad has two separate sources of strength.

  • The content of the claim, image and proof themselves
  • The preparation you have made for the claim, images and proofs

We can strengthen the power of each of these statements in two separate ways:

  • By increasing the intensity of the content: by making greater promises
  • By changing the place or position of the work you have done.

Make no mistake, it is acceptance that we are looking for.

Effective advertising is built of reactions.

We are creating a stream of acceptances.

This is the essence of building your ad.

We now know that Gradualization is starting your ad with a statement that will be accepted, and then building a chain of subsequent acceptances upon this first statement.

The purpose of this chain of acceptances is to lead your reader to a goal conclusion, which he will then accept, but which he would not as readily or as thoroughly have accepted without all of this groundwork.

Ex: selling a TV repair guide.

Before you sell it, you must make the prospect believe he can repair his TV himself.

As such, the headline they chose was “why haven’t TV owners been told about these facts?”

The next sentence was “Was your TV purchased after the spring of 1947?” The answer was yes in 95% of cases to reinforce inclusion.

“Then here is the full, uncensored story of how you can avoid those $15-$20 repair bills— avoid those $30-$60 year service fees— and still get the perfect, movie-clear pictures you’ve dreamed about”.

Nothing about repairing the TV yourself, it’s just about saving money by avoiding repairing fees.

Then they talk about how TV experts discovered the truth about the TV, that it should not break down more than once a year, and that by the way, repairing TV is so simple that anyone can do it.

The new claim was not written in a new sentence at the beginning of a new paragraph but was linked directly inside a claim that had been previously accepted.

One fully-believed promise has ten times the sales power of ten partially-believed promises.

Now, how do you strengthen this believability structure?

What are the devices you can choose from to add believability to any promise, in any ad?

  1. The Inclusion Question

Asking a question your prospect would answer yes to.

Eg: do you find it difficult to talk to girls on Tinder?

2. Detailed Identification

“Did you buy your TV after 1974?”

3. Contradiction of Present (False) Beliefs

“I know you think this is true; but I’m going to show YOU it’s false.” Best used, of course, in conjunction with strong authority strong enough to contradict present (unpleasant) beliefs, and get away with it.

“Forget everything you think you know…”

4. The Language of Logic

Your objective is to build belief at the same exact time that you build desire. To do this, you interlace each new promise to the language signals that show that it logically follows from everything that has been proved before.

Simply becauseThe reason forAs an example
HabituallyThere is a basic, underlying reason for this.Find that reason
ExplainsThe meansAs easily and logically as this
“This has been proved In/ thousands. . . .” “Sound impossible?  Not at all.  It’s actually as simple. . . .”“Here’s why. . . .”
“And, most important of all, is the fact that. . . .”“Therefore .  . .”“This was,  without a doubt,  the most thorough. . . .”
“They  discovered— in case after case—that. . . .”  

5. Syllogistic thinking

“The bigger the spark, the bigger the explosion. The bigger the explosion, the faster the car goes.”

6. Other Belief Forms

Once you grasp the fundamental idea that form (structure) determines believability, then all sorts of opportunities open up to you. You realize that simply by the arrangement of your claims, you can add to their believability.

  • Contingency Structures: If…..then…
  • Repetition of Proof: Echoing: These experts found… These experts found… These experts found
  • Promise-Belief-Promise Variation: every sentence of promise must be followed with another proof so that the reader does not question what is stated.
  • Paragraph Parallelism: where the same word structure used in an accepted statement is then picked up exactly, and used to borrow acceptance for a fresh claim.

The fourth technique of breakthrough copy: Redefinition

How to Remove Objections to Your Product

Give a new definition to your product. The objective is to remove a roadblock to your sale, before the prospect even knows it exists.

Some products have drawbacks that repel buyers. Your purpose is to take care of the drawback before the buyer is aware of it.

There are three types of drawbacks.

  1. Too complicated to use

In that case, one needs to use simplification, which is framing the problem in another way.

Ex: a very effective soap had a strong smell. To turn it from liability to asset, they framed people’s need to use their soap because otherwise they would smell bad and turn their friends away. In order not to smell bad, one needs the strongest of soap, one so strong its smell is smelled miles away. Fixed.

When something new brings in a new way of doing things that people do not accept as valid or important enough, you need to redefine, then mechanize the new simplicity.

The more revolutionary your product is, the more resistance you will face.

2. Not important enough

Escalation is giving your product more importance than it is credited for. You need to redefine your product, widen its application, broadens benefits and show it applies to a dozen of vital situations.

Eg: You are paying 20 000 dollars for your car…and a 10 dollars part could rob you of the enjoyment and service the car is providing to you.

Suddenly, that 10 dollars part seems important.

3. Too expensive

Your product costs too much because customers compare them to other products in the same field. You need to get the customer to focus on the product.

-> nflate the value of the product and to give a great discount at the end. Say that each added to one another, the product is worth 30 or 40 dollars but if you act now you’ll have the chance to get them for 3 each.

It’s selling dollars for dimes.

The fifth technique of breakthrough copy: Mechanization

How to Verbally Prove That Your Product Does What You Claim

When your prospect reads copy, reactions are happening in his brain.

1. Demands for more information, more image, more desire.

2. Demands for proof. He knows he wants it. Now he wants to know that whether what you are saying is true.

3. Demands for a mechanism. How does it work.

Let’s focus on this mechanism thing. The question about mechanism is not whether you should include it in your copy or not, but merely how much of it you should include?

Stage one: name de mechanism

If your prospect is aware of the mechanism, just name it: “take astounding pictures with this Sony Camera”.

Sometimes, the mechanism cannot simply be named, for two reasons:

Stage two: describe the mechanism:

  1. Because the prospect doesn’t understand their mechanism.

You build a strong, quick promise—and then you follow up with the reason why you can deliver that promise.

“Who else wants a whiter wash with no hard work?

2. Because everybody else has the same mechanism, and the same promise, and the same price. And the market is getting tired, and you need a new way to compete.

Stage Three: Feature the Mechanism

When the market is highly sophisticated, or your mechanism is extremely strong.

Mechanism can be inside your ad, to prove your main claim, or on top of the ad, elevated by the state of your market to becoming the main claim.

The sixth technique of breakthrough copy: Concentration:

How to Destroy Alternate Ways for Your Prospect to Satisfy His Desire

No successful copy ever sells a product. It sells a way of satisfying a particular desire.

Ways to beat up the competition

  • Get the best product
  • Better promise (in the copy, in the product, like “guaranteed for life”)
  • The product role, the role the person that buys the product can play (Ferrari)
  • Response and reaction: the capacity to adapt one’s marketing faced with the competition
  • Direct attack: the technique we will discuss here: it’s the art of showing your prospect the weakness of a competitor’s product that your product does not have.

Concentration is the process of pointing out weaknesses in the competition then proving to customers that your product gives them what they want without them.

One way to do so is to explain what the product of a competitor does, and what yours does (better). It’s about comparing. “Most lamps consume huge volume of electricity while being detrimental to the eye and brain. Not Electra. Electra lamps feature a…”

You point out what competitors do badly, then point out how you do it well.

Sometimes, the side effect of a competitor’s product is an experience. In that case, you want to use a method that outlines “what happens when you use the product now” (headache, unease, etc) and then explain “what will happen once you use the new product”.

Washing product ads are good at that. “On the left, a competitive product. On the right, Cilitbang”.

The seventh technique of breakthrough copy: Camouflage:

How to Borrow Conviction for Your Copy

Make an ad that looks like a newspaper article (in style, words, etc).


No sentence can be effective if it contains only the facts alone. It must also contain emotion, evaluation, impact, if those facts are to be given meaning and importance to the reader.

The same is true for every sentence you write of copy. That sentence should contain not only promise, not only image, not only logic, but as much of all three as possible.

You start your ad by creating your headline. You develop your copy story from that headline. But if the copy story doesn’t develop—if you gradually find that the headline isn’t really that good after all— then perhaps the very elements that are begging to come out of your 6-point type should be at the top of your ad.

This is what makes copywriting so interesting. You’re always being surprised—with ideas from the most ungodly places.

Just make sure you’ve got your eyes open wide enough to catch all of them.

Momentum: the energy which draws your reader into your copy and incites him to read it.

There are two types:

  • The actual momentum: The first type, the momentum-phrases, are time-honored. You insert them in your copy primarily in your transition sentences, to keep interest from flagging. Examples:
    • “They paid up to $22.50 a person to learn priceless techniques like these:”
    • “Here’s how”
    • “Here is the information you will find in this book.”
    • “Let me explain.”
    • “All I ask from you is this.”
    • “What you are going to do, in the very first hour that you receive the book, is this.”
    • “And yet, it’s only the beginning.”
    • “THEN put this simple trick to work for you—that VERY SAME HOUR”
    • “For example—”
    • “Read the thrilling answer below.”
    • “To start with . . .”
    • “Just wait till you try this.”
  • Incomplete statements, or teasers, that draw the reader further into the copy in order to complete them: It’s based on the simple principle that if YOU make a statement that interests your reader, and if you purposely do not complete that statement, so that there is a question of how it can be done, then he will read on to find out more. In other words, you are continually:
    • Creating interest in a specific point.
    • Raising a question in his mind about that point.
    • Implying an answer to that question later in the copy.

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